Hi,
I am looking for feedback on the first cut of the second project. Specifically if the plot and resolution/ending works.
Much of the audio is not finished past the first two scenes.
The password is 'Right' I am also looking for ideas for changing the title.
Choosing Rights
~Jackie
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ReplyDeleteJackie,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I want to give you props on tackling such an issue via your work. I love the idea, and I'm a huge fan of something that's provocative. And I'm already a fan of what you've put together.
But, with that aside, I strongly believe the plot you have already is solid. You effectively establish the overall idea, and the hypothetical you probe your audience with. I personally didn't see anything taking place that would "throw" grasping the concept, or the understanding of what took/is taking place. The entire story was effective, in my eyes. I honestly think the only items you need to handle are the ones you already mentioned, which really isn't much.