The montage that starts around 2:30 looks and sounds really good. I really like the music, it is really fitting; until the piano comes in, I didn't like that little sound bit. If you are able to I would give the end about 10 more frames. I didn't love the clouds, if they didn't fade in and out a fade might fix it, or lower the opacity maybe. The color is still bright in the places that you were having trouble with, but it looks much better. It flows well, and the cuts seem good. ~Jackie
The ending made me laugh. Thought the story was very relatable and the setting was appropriate. I noticed a lot changes from your rough cut and I agree with the changes you made. It looks a lot better.
I thought the lighting looked much better from your original cut. I just the audio was low in certain places. Like when tom and Joe talk for the first time.
The montage that starts around 2:30 looks and sounds really good. I really like the music, it is really fitting; until the piano comes in, I didn't like that little sound bit.
ReplyDeleteIf you are able to I would give the end about 10 more frames. I didn't love the clouds, if they didn't fade in and out a fade might fix it, or lower the opacity maybe.
The color is still bright in the places that you were having trouble with, but it looks much better.
It flows well, and the cuts seem good.
~Jackie
The ending made me laugh. Thought the story was very relatable and the setting was appropriate. I noticed a lot changes from your rough cut and I agree with the changes you made. It looks a lot better.
ReplyDeleteI thought the lighting looked much better from your original cut. I just the audio was low in certain places. Like when tom and Joe talk for the first time.
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