I really like this idea but did you adr the voices? you can tell the voices dont match up in some of the scenes and their was some scenes that the colors didnt match with the previous scenes but other than that I enjoyed it! Thought it was funny and also clever to use the chess game.
You should really go back and fix the exposure it is way to bright in the background in stephs first scene and in the second scene with the boys. Definitely fix the ADR. What happened to the original sound from the boom pole? if you isolate that audio and bump it up it could sound better and you may not need ADR. A lot of the scenes the lighting is normal in one and really bright in the other like scene 3 and 4.. and that is probably because of exposure Fix the exposure in the cafe scene as well. The cut where they walk out of the class room and it cuts to andrew is a jump, I would keep the pan and just cut that. When the boys meet in the hall the exposure is off again , the darks are too dark and the lights are dull. And the last scene when the boys are defeated you cut off Darhams head, unless that was intentional... But other than those things I think you cut it well and that helped the story line.
I like the concept of this short film. It was one of my favorite ideas I heard about before we actually started filming. I think it still is one of my favorite ideas put together over all. The things I think that need fixing is the lighting in most of the shots. Like Molly said, there are definitely points where it is overexposed and could use a bit of tweaking. The only thing that bothers me is the voices not syncing up. My job was to hold the boom pole, and I think you should've used that as oppose to adr-ing it. It doesn't match up and it looks a little awkward. If you still have the audio from the boom pole I think I'd use that instead to make it look more smooth and natural, but that's just my opinion. Good job Dan!
I really like this idea but did you adr the voices? you can tell the voices dont match up in some of the scenes and their was some scenes that the colors didnt match with the previous scenes but other than that I enjoyed it! Thought it was funny and also clever to use the chess game.
ReplyDeleteYou should really go back and fix the exposure it is way to bright in the background in stephs first scene and in the second scene with the boys. Definitely fix the ADR. What happened to the original sound from the boom pole? if you isolate that audio and bump it up it could sound better and you may not need ADR. A lot of the scenes the lighting is normal in one and really bright in the other like scene 3 and 4.. and that is probably because of exposure Fix the exposure in the cafe scene as well. The cut where they walk out of the class room and it cuts to andrew is a jump, I would keep the pan and just cut that. When the boys meet in the hall the exposure is off again , the darks are too dark and the lights are dull. And the last scene when the boys are defeated you cut off Darhams head, unless that was intentional... But other than those things I think you cut it well and that helped the story line.
ReplyDeleteI like the concept of this short film. It was one of my favorite ideas I heard about before we actually started filming. I think it still is one of my favorite ideas put together over all. The things I think that need fixing is the lighting in most of the shots. Like Molly said, there are definitely points where it is overexposed and could use a bit of tweaking. The only thing that bothers me is the voices not syncing up. My job was to hold the boom pole, and I think you should've used that as oppose to adr-ing it. It doesn't match up and it looks a little awkward. If you still have the audio from the boom pole I think I'd use that instead to make it look more smooth and natural, but that's just my opinion. Good job Dan!
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