Tuesday, April 22, 2014

Untitled

Its unfinished and rough but its a start. 
any thoughts are appreciated.


http://youtu.be/2KWvXYpq7Go


2 comments:

  1. I think you need something (a shot preferably) to transition to the next day. Otherwise this cut feels very abrupt.

    I'm not sure if this is the compression, but everything looks very overexposed. Hopefully we can tweak this in color correction. Your audio is fine, though you may need to increase the levels on some of the lines. Start thinking of music and effects.

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  2. I know you posted this the other day, and I think you probably fixed it on Thursday, but the audio, especially in the beginning, was only in the left if you put on head phones.
    ~Jackie

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