Sunday, March 16, 2014

Project 1

Here's the original scene:

New Girl: Julius Pepperwood

And my cut

2 comments:

  1. Great Scene!!! Franco was very funny and true to the character. Personally I think that the cuts could have flowed better and that the lighting was a little to bright in some scenes. for example when Pepperwood walks in, the light to the right seems like it is not illuminating enough of the set. There seems to be only light point down on the character who is sitting's shoe.

    Other than those tiny things I thought that it was well done and very funny!
    Good job!

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  2. I think the brightness may be an issue with the compression to YouTube. It should look better uncompressed. Please note the c-stand and battery pack in frame, as well as the lights reflecting in characters glasses. Otherwise I like this. The cuts will seem smoother when you ADR and finalize the soundtrack.

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