I'm not particularly happy with how this came out. I could of done a bunch of different things but i didn't. I just have to fix a few clips and find a good piece of music and it'll be done.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u25Rct6cXbk&feature=youtu.be
Christina, I definitely believe you've picked a provocative idea to work with. And I don't think you're giving yourself enough credit. I see a lot of potential here.
ReplyDeleteAs you've already said yourself, you need to find a good piece of music. That in its own right will help establish the overall mood of what you're going for here. Maybe even some sound effects - an example being her heartbeat, especially when she's squeezing her own fingers trying not to let the pen affect her as much as it is from being out of place. I think once you bring things like that into the picture, this will blossom into something much more prominent.
Ryan has a good point; maybe even the cracking of her knuckles over her heartbeat as well.
Deletethank you so much ryan! yeah i think i've found a really good piece of music to work with!
Deleteand thanks mike yeah that's a really good idea!
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