Hello everyone, this is my rough cut of Ambulans Mortuus. Let me know what you think. There are still a few glitches I need to fix, but I am pretty happy with this cut as of now. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X1acL84RYAQ
Shannon, this is great. I'm rather taken back at how vibrant and lush the lighting is, and how clear your picture is throughout. Exceptional attention to those technical details. I'm also a fan of the idea, and I think your execution with it was spot on. The music, sound effects for the stabbings and the sudden scream fit in perfectly. The only real thing I would say to change, which I'm sure you're already in the process of doing, is that screeching in the audio. I'm guessing that needs to be there for the sake of her "coming-to" post reanimation? It's just too loud, that's all. But overall, I'm a big fan of what you've already put together.
Amazing! The story and concept are so original and the cuts worked perfectly with her flash backs to what happened and everything. The high pitch noise is a bit over whelming but I'm sure you can fix that. Other than that your project came out so well!!
Great! But whatever the high-pitched noise is is really obnoxious, or perhaps just way too loud.
ReplyDeleteShannon, this is great. I'm rather taken back at how vibrant and lush the lighting is, and how clear your picture is throughout. Exceptional attention to those technical details. I'm also a fan of the idea, and I think your execution with it was spot on. The music, sound effects for the stabbings and the sudden scream fit in perfectly. The only real thing I would say to change, which I'm sure you're already in the process of doing, is that screeching in the audio. I'm guessing that needs to be there for the sake of her "coming-to" post reanimation? It's just too loud, that's all. But overall, I'm a big fan of what you've already put together.
ReplyDeleteAmazing! The story and concept are so original and the cuts worked perfectly with her flash backs to what happened and everything. The high pitch noise is a bit over whelming but I'm sure you can fix that. Other than that your project came out so well!!
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome, Shannon; I love the opening shot.
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