This is definitely a picture lock. Do you want to add any sound effects? Maybe fire engine siren, crashes, etc. at the beginning. Maybe sounds of the Ping pong match. I think your color looks good.
I really like what you've done with this Amanda. The overall storytelling in this piece is wonderful. I completely agree with the music you chose, how you've structured your cuts (especially using the fire drill that day to your advantage - very opportunistic), and how his dialogue goes in conjunction with what the visuals show. The use of black and white fits very well with where you've placed it, effectively showing the difference between the past events and the present. Great work.
This is definitely a picture lock. Do you want to add any sound effects? Maybe fire engine siren, crashes, etc. at the beginning. Maybe sounds of the Ping pong match. I think your color looks good.
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ReplyDeleteI really like what you've done with this Amanda. The overall storytelling in this piece is wonderful. I completely agree with the music you chose, how you've structured your cuts (especially using the fire drill that day to your advantage - very opportunistic), and how his dialogue goes in conjunction with what the visuals show. The use of black and white fits very well with where you've placed it, effectively showing the difference between the past events and the present. Great work.
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